From db99d5a34c9f8ef49241fb5d7fc5c8ce0595a458 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andrew Williams <andy@tensixtyone.com>
Date: Sat, 27 Jan 2024 11:28:38 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Cleanup some language

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 content/_index.md               |  2 +-
 content/policies/cctv_policy.md | 14 +++++++-------
 content/thank_you.md            | 12 ++++++------
 content/visit.md                | 10 +++++-----
 4 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/_index.md b/content/_index.md
index aa5462d..df78e78 100644
--- a/content/_index.md
+++ b/content/_index.md
@@ -21,4 +21,4 @@ Leigh Hackspace is currently <span id="hackspace-status"><i class="fas fa-spinne
 | Saturday  | 12:00 - 17:00 |
 | Sunday    | Closed        |
 
-We currently operate a reduced opening hours due to member availability. The hackspace can be open outside of these hours and a banner above will appear when it is open, otherwise please check on [Slack](https://join.slack.com/t/leighhack/shared_invite/enQtNDYzMjEyMDMxNDExLTE1MWY5N2IwMzdhMzQ0ZWFiNDkyNzJmMGM1ZmFkODcwMGM5ODFmYmI4MjhmM2JiMWEyY2E3NTRjMTQzMzljZWU).
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+We currently operate reduced opening hours due to member availability. The hackspace can be open outside of these hours and a banner above will appear when it is open, otherwise please check on [Slack](https://join.slack.com/t/leighhack/shared_invite/enQtNDYzMjEyMDMxNDExLTE1MWY5N2IwMzdhMzQ0ZWFiNDkyNzJmMGM1ZmFkODcwMGM5ODFmYmI4MjhmM2JiMWEyY2E3NTRjMTQzMzljZWU).
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diff --git a/content/policies/cctv_policy.md b/content/policies/cctv_policy.md
index 1327dba..d139a2a 100644
--- a/content/policies/cctv_policy.md
+++ b/content/policies/cctv_policy.md
@@ -29,17 +29,17 @@ Cameras are located at strategic points throughout the hackspace’s premises, p
 
 All cameras are also clearly visible.
 
-Appropriate signs are prominently displayed so that members, public and other visitors are aware they are entering an area covered by CCTV.  
+Appropriate signs are prominently displayed so that members, the public and other visitors are aware they are entering an area covered by CCTV.  
 
 ## Recording and retention of images
 
-Images produced by the CCTV equipment are intended to be as clear as possible so that they are effective for the purposes set out above.  Maintenance checks of the equipment are undertaken on a regular basis to ensure it is working properly and that the media is producing high quality images.
+Images produced by the CCTV equipment are intended to be as clear as possible so that they are effective for the purposes set out above.  Maintenance checks of the equipment are undertaken on a regular basis to ensure it is working properly and that the media is producing high-quality images.
 
-Images may be recorded either in constant real-time (24 hours a day throughout the year), or only at certain times, as the needs of the business dictate.
+Images may be recorded either in constant real-time (24 hours a day throughout the year) or only at certain times, as the needs of the business dictate.
 
-As the recording system records digital images, any CCTV images that are held on the hard drive of a PC or server are deleted and overwritten on a recycling basis and, in any event, once the hard drive has reached the end of its use, it will be erased prior to disposal.  
+As the recording system records digital images, any CCTV images that are held on the hard drive of a PC or server are deleted and overwritten on a recycling basis and, in any event, once the hard drive has reached the end of its use, it will be erased before disposal.  
 
-Images that are stored on, or transferred on to, removable media such as CDs or which are stored digitally are erased or destroyed once the purpose of the recording is no longer relevant.  In normal circumstances, this will be a period of 12 months.  However, where a law enforcement agency is investigating a crime, images may need to be retained for a longer period.
+Images that are stored on, or transferred onto, removable media such as CDs or which are stored digitally are erased or destroyed once the purpose of the recording is no longer relevant.  In normal circumstances, this will be 12 months.  However, where a law enforcement agency is investigating a crime, images may need to be retained for a longer period.
 
 ## Access to and disclosure of images
 
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ The images that are filmed are recorded centrally and held in a secure location.
 
 Disclosure of images to other third parties will only be made in accordance with the purposes for which the system is used and will be limited to:  
 
-* The police and other law enforcement agencies, where the images recorded could assist in the prevention or detection of a crime or the identification and prosecution of an offender or the identification of a victim or witness.  
+* The police and other law enforcement agencies, where the images are recorded could assist in the prevention or detection of a crime or the identification and prosecution of an offender or the identification of a victim or witness.  
 * Prosecution agencies, such as the Crown Prosecution Service.  
 * Relevant legal representatives.  
 * Directors of the hackspace in regards to dispute resolution or investigation of rules and code of conduct breaches.
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ The hackspace will usually respond promptly and in any case within one month of
 
 The hackspace will always check the identity of the person making the request before processing it.
 
-The directors will always determine whether disclosure of your images will reveal third party information, as you have no right to access CCTV images relating to other people.  In this case, the images of third parties may need to be obscured if it would otherwise involve an unfair intrusion into their privacy.
+The directors will always determine whether disclosure of your images will reveal third-party information, as you have no right to access CCTV images relating to other people.  In this case, the images of third parties may need to be obscured if it would otherwise involve an unfair intrusion into their privacy.
 
 If the hackspace is unable to comply with your request because access could prejudice the prevention or detection of crime or the apprehension or prosecution of offenders, you will be advised accordingly.   
 
diff --git a/content/thank_you.md b/content/thank_you.md
index 982eb1c..4a1158b 100644
--- a/content/thank_you.md
+++ b/content/thank_you.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ subtitle: "You're now a member."
 show_cta: false
 ---
 
-**Thank you** for joining us! You now have access to Leigh Hackspace and its facilities. You're probably wondering what to do next? Hopefully we can guide you on your next steps.
+**Thank you** for joining us! You now have access to Leigh Hackspace and its facilities. You're probably wondering what to do next? Hopefully, we can guide you on your next steps.
 
 ### Your subscription
 
@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ First of all, __your subscription is not a contract__. You can cancel it at any
 
 By default, subscriptions are set to the first of the month. This means your Direct Debit will be taken on or after the first of the month (should the first of the month fall on a weekend). If you would like to change this, please get in touch with a director and we can adjust it to your needs.
 
-### Get chatting to other members
+### Get chatting with other members
 
 If you want to start chatting with other hackspace members straight away, the hackspace uses Slack. This is a messaging tool similar to WhatsApp or Facebook Messenger that can be downloaded to your phone, or used on your computer. 
 
-To join our slack click [this link](https://join.slack.com/t/leighhack/shared_invite/enQtNDYzMjEyMDMxNDExLTE1MWY5N2IwMzdhMzQ0ZWFiNDkyNzJmMGM1ZmFkODcwMGM5ODFmYmI4MjhmM2JiMWEyY2E3NTRjMTQzMzljZWU) and you'll be guided to create an account with your email address.
+To join our Slack click [this link](https://join.slack.com/t/leighhack/shared_invite/enQtNDYzMjEyMDMxNDExLTE1MWY5N2IwMzdhMzQ0ZWFiNDkyNzJmMGM1ZmFkODcwMGM5ODFmYmI4MjhmM2JiMWEyY2E3NTRjMTQzMzljZWU) and you'll be guided to create an account with your email address.
 
 ### Vist the hackspace and get to know people
 
@@ -27,14 +27,14 @@ The best way to meet your fellow members is to visit during our popular times. T
 
 ### Sign up with Authentik (optional)
 
-Authentik is our login system for anything IT related in the hackspace. If you want to make use of our internal infrastructure for IT projects, then its suggested you sign up **but it is not mandatory**!
+Authentik is our login system for anything IT-related in the hackspace. If you want to make use of our internal infrastructure for IT projects, then it's suggested you sign up **but it is not mandatory**!
 
 You can [sign up here](https://id.leighhack.org/if/flow/hackspace-new-user-enrollment/). We ask that you please use the same email address that you used when signing up for your membership, as it will automatically link your subscription and allow you access.
 
 ### Check the Wiki for information
 
-We have a member maintained [Wiki](https://wiki.leighhack.org) which has details of the policies, procedures, and essential documentation for items in the space.
+We have a member-maintained [Wiki](https://wiki.leighhack.org) which has details of the policies, procedures, and essential documentation for items in the space.
 
 ### Get in contact
 
-If you have any other questions, please get in touch either via Slack or in-person at the hackspace. The [Useful Contacts](https://wiki.leighhack.org/membership/useful_contacts/) page on the Wiki details who is the best contact for each hackspace area.
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+If you have any other questions, please get in touch either via Slack or in person at the hackspace. The [Useful Contacts](https://wiki.leighhack.org/membership/useful_contacts/) page on the Wiki details who is the best contact for each hackspace area.
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diff --git a/content/visit.md b/content/visit.md
index a7dbcd0..7e078c6 100644
--- a/content/visit.md
+++ b/content/visit.md
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ subtitle: Come take a look around.
 
 Leigh Hackspace is located inside [Leigh Spinners Mill](https://www.spinnersmill.co.uk), a [Grade II* listed](https://historicengland.org.uk/advice/heritage-at-risk/search-register/list-entry/48399) former cotton spinning mill, restored by Leigh Building Preservation Trust and now hosting [multiple business and community projects](https://www.spinnersmill.co.uk).
 
-We operate drop-in open tours on Saturday afternoons from 12pm to 1pm.
+We operate drop-in open tours on Saturday afternoons from **12 pm** to **1 pm**.
 
 Tours at other times can be arranged by [contacting us](mailto:info@leighhack.org), while most members are local please try to give a day or two notice beforehand so we can arrange for someone to meet you. 
 
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Leigh Spinners Mill is located at the end of Park Road, use the postcode `WN7 2L
 
 ### Car Parking
 
-The mill has a large gravel public car-park, and additional overflow areas. Parking is free but may become busy during popular times. The car park is open from 8am until 10pm, if you are visiting outside of these hours then its recommended you park elsewhere. Please, **do not park on Park Lane**, as this is residents only parking.
+The mill has a large gravel public car-park and additional overflow areas. Parking is free but may become busy during popular times. The car park is open from **8 am** until **10 pm**, if you are visiting outside of these hours then it is recommended you park elsewhere. Please, **do not park on Park Lane**, as this is residents-only parking.
 
 ## Travelling by bike
 
@@ -40,12 +40,12 @@ The mill does have a cycle rack outside the main entry to Mill 2, but we have mo
 
 The nearest bus stop, [Sandersons Croft](https://bustimes.org/stops/1800WK10281), is serviced by the **[9](https://tfgm.com/public-transport/bus/routes/9-higher-folds)**, **[34](https://www.stagecoachbus.com/routes/greater-manchester/34/manchester-leigh/xjao034.o)**, **[126](https://tfgm.com/public-transport/bus/routes/126-leigh)**, **[984](https://tfgm.com/public-transport/bus/routes/984-town-lane)**, and **[WVR3](https://www.warringtonsownbuses.co.uk/services/WBTR/WVR3)** buses. 
 
-Most interconnecting services can be found at Leigh Bus Station, with the **9** and **34** taking you to Sandersons Croft. From there the mill is only a two minute walk.
+Most interconnecting services can be found at Leigh Bus Station, with the **9** and **34** taking you to Sandersons Croft. From there the mill is only a two-minute walk.
 
-Alternatively, the Mill is only a 30 minute walk from Leigh Bus Station. The [route](https://maps.app.goo.gl/tfxb8Koa8rQ2Zs9m9) follows a flat, well-lit primary road from the bus station. 
+Alternatively, the Mill is only a 30-minute walk from Leigh Bus Station. The [route](https://maps.app.goo.gl/tfxb8Koa8rQ2Zs9m9) follows a flat, well-lit primary road from the bus station. 
 
 ### Train
 
 **Atherton** (ATN) is the closest train station to the hackspace. From there you'll either need a taxi or a bus via Leigh Bus Station.
 
-The nearest mainline station is **Wigan Wallgate** (WGW) which has direct trains to Atherton station. Wallgate is a short 100 meter walk from Wigan North Western which is on the West Coast Mainline.
+The nearest mainline station is **Wigan Wallgate** (WGW) which has direct trains to Atherton station. Wallgate is a short 100-meter walk from Wigan North Western which is on the West Coast Mainline.